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Surprise that Changed My Life

March 18, 2016 By Mary Hill 17 Comments

For my Slice of Life post tonight, I write about a surprise that changed my life years ago.  This post is also for the Five Minute Friday community where ladies come together to write without backing up for five minutes on a prompt word. Tonight’s word is “surprise.”

 

My husband surprises me still. His biggest surprise ever happened on our second date night more than 14 years ago.

My husband surprises me still. His biggest surprise ever happened on our second date night more than 14 years ago.

 

A Redeeming Surprise

He’s not coming. Why do I do this? Get hopes up? Excitement peaked. Then nothing happens? I waited two hours in my mom’s home for my date to arrive. Two hours late, and he isn’t coming.

My brother showed up. “Well, he is probably not a nice guy. Sorry.”

Tears pooled, threatening to spill out. “Well, it’s okay. I will be fine.”

“Come out with us to dinner,” he said.

“Naw go on. Have fun,” I answered.

Just then my late date pulls up into the driveway. My little brother who was four inches taller than me rounds his shoulders and sets out toward him.

“It’s okay, don’t,” I said.

My date unfolded from his car and extended his hands. He was not as tall as my brother, but he had a presence of calm about him. The bluster of my brother evaporated as he shook his hand.

“I’m late, sorry,” he said. “I got lost. I am Ricky Hill.”

“Steve Pearson,” my brother nodded back at him. “Glad to meet you. I hope you have a nice date.” His took his hand back with a curt nod and got into the car. Before leaving, he looked at me. “You going to be okay.”

“Yes. Love you little brother,” I called as he pulled out of the driveway.

We went out for a brief date, dinner at Capris and then came back to my mom’s house.

“I’m really sorry for being late,” Ricky told me as we sat on my mom’s glider looking out over the hill toward the mountain view that my mom enjoyed everyday. “I am not good at directions and those Mapquest directions had me turning around in circles. I asked this guy at a station and that’s how I found you.”

“It’s okay,” I shrugged.

“No, it’s not, but I’ll make it up to you.” He said determinedly. “Well,” he took my hand, kissing the back of it and then kissing my cheek. “I enjoyed taking you out to dinner. I hope you will answer my calls. I wouldn’t blame you if you didn’t.”

I laughed and looked into his green eyes. “Please stop being so hard on yourself. I enjoyed our time together. When can we do this again?”

“Not sure. I have my girls next week. Let me call you, and we will arrange something.” he said as he got into his car.  “I have a long ride, sixty plus miles. Night.”

“Don’t get lost,” I joked.

My first date with Ricky Hill  made me cry and then made me happy.  I felt butterflies in my stomach as I watched his car disappear, wondering if he would call me. It was 2003 and neither one of us had a cell phone.

I tried not to think about the phone the next day as I sat on my computer trying to write up plans for a program for my school library where I worked.

At five o’clock, my mom came in. “You have a guest.” She smiled at me.

“Huh?” I wasn’t expecting anyone.

I went to the front door and Ricky stood there with a bouquet of roses in his hands. “Surprise. I told you I would make it up to you. I want to redeem myself.”

I took the flowers and kissed him on the cheek.

I still remember those two nights now almost 14 years later. He more than surprised me and redeemed himself. He took my heart and love.


slice of lifeThis post is written for Day 18 of the March Slice of Life Story Challenge #SOL16.

I will also join several of the hops listed on my Link-up Parties page.

 

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  1. Embroidery Blog says

    May 15, 2016 at 10:46 pm

    What a beautiful love story! 🙂 So happy!

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    • Mary Hill says

      May 20, 2016 at 10:36 pm

      Hi, thanks for stopping by and offering your encouragement. 😉

      Reply
  2. Kathleen says

    March 22, 2016 at 8:53 am

    Thanks for sharing that Mary, I am a romantic and love stories like that, especially when they go on to true love. Yes, for gentlemen.

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  3. Susan Shipe says

    March 21, 2016 at 12:19 pm

    What a beautiful love story!
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  4. Gayl Wright says

    March 20, 2016 at 8:37 pm

    What a beautiful story, Mary. So sweet! 🙂 Blessings to you!
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  5. Janet Vinyard says

    March 19, 2016 at 10:00 pm

    Wonderful story – love conquers all! Thanks for sharing it! Blessings, Janet

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    • Mary Hill says

      March 19, 2016 at 10:40 pm

      You welcome Janet. So glad you stopped by.
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  6. Cheryl Simpson says

    March 19, 2016 at 9:27 am

    What a sweet story! I love how your brother responded with kindness and care. He loved you well in the moment when the situation was all so disappointing. It’s wonderful to have support during that time. Two hours of waiting is a long, long time.

    I’m so glad he didn’t give up on finding your house. I can only imagine how frustrating that must have been for him.

    His return the next day with flowers is beautiful and sweet.

    I’m visiting from FMF.

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    • Mary Hill says

      March 19, 2016 at 2:39 pm

      Cheryl, he showed me how a true gentleman should treat a woman. He did more than say he was sorry. He did his best to make it right with me. His actions early on are why I fell in love with him.
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  7. Ifeoma Samuel says

    March 19, 2016 at 5:54 am

    Love stories are so cute and keep me smiling, Mary. Thanks for sharing this.
    Hugs and Blessings to you
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  8. Lux G. says

    March 19, 2016 at 3:30 am

    Aww. Amazing how love moves. Beautiful inspiring story.

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    • Mary Hill says

      March 19, 2016 at 2:39 pm

      Thanks. We have a true, on-going love story. 🙂
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  9. Gloria Phifer says

    March 19, 2016 at 12:09 am

    What a lovely story and a happy ending…thank you for sharing…I am Gloria…visiting from FMF.

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  10. Tara says

    March 18, 2016 at 11:31 pm

    So fun to read about your first date together. I love that your little brother was willing to stick up for you. I’m in the 43 spot this week.

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    • Mary Hill says

      March 18, 2016 at 11:34 pm

      Tara, I visited you as you were visiting me. 🙂 Surprise.
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  11. Wendy says

    March 18, 2016 at 11:15 pm

    Awww! So glad you gave him that second chance. I was the late one on my first date with my husband. Again, couldn’t find his street!

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    • Mary Hill says

      March 19, 2016 at 2:40 pm

      Wendy, he showed up the next day just to redeem himself. He is a true gentleman. 🙂
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