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H is for Haiku

April 9, 2013 By Mary Hill 7 Comments

haiga example
From: http://raysweb.net/haiku/pages/definitions.html

By Mary Hill

The Haiku is a traditional Japanese poem.  The background and origin of this genre of poetry is covered well on several websites including Dr. L Wheeler’s  website on poetry resources. Another great resource for teachers on the haiku is http://www.kidzone.ws/poetry/haiku.htm. 
Also visit Bruce Lansky’s Giggle Poetry for another tutorial on this poetic form.

Now for your quiz.  Can someone tell me how to write a Haiku poem?  Remember, this format for the poem from your school days:  

five syllables
seven syllables
five syllables


Okay class, do you remember what the traditional subject matter of the Haiku is? If you wrote “nature” on your paper give yourself an A. The best Haiku poems are beautiful for their simplicity and a play of imagery.

Let’s have a contest today.  Who can write the best nature Haiku?  Write them in the comments section and everyone vote by replying to their favorite Haiku.

This is an old Haiku of mine featuring five mini verses. I found this in a journal from my college days.  I love this format.

Springs Triumph Entry
By Mary Hill

Rain patters on roof
Birds swoop through the eaves flying
Through the misty air

Spider webs glide on
Icy winds that kiss the dew
On a spring morning

Weep not for winter’s
Passing like an old woman
Lacing her grave cloth

Her splendid sister
Waits in the eaves to present 
Shining red tulips

Butterflies and birds
Pansies and corn flowers dance
In meadows awake


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  1. Mary Hill says

    April 10, 2013 at 3:36 am

    Thanks for replying and your encouragements. I will have another poetry blog up tomorrow. Have to tackle I and J. I think I am a day behind? 🙂

    Reply
  2. D.G. Hudson says

    April 10, 2013 at 12:05 am

    Great idea and haiku. Some people are good at writing them, some not. It’s not in my bag of skills. Sorry.

    Reply
  3. Crystal Collier says

    April 9, 2013 at 11:00 pm

    If I had any brain energy left this time of the day, I’d add to your awesomeness up there, but alas… Such a beautiful piece!

    Reply
  4. Tracy Moore says

    April 9, 2013 at 8:55 pm

    Lovely haiku. I’ve always enjoyed them. If I had the time I could write one, but there just aren’t enough hours in this day. Maybe another time. Yours is beautiful. 🙂

    Reply
  5. Lynn Proctor says

    April 9, 2013 at 6:47 pm

    although i fancy myself a poet–i don’t do haiku very well–though i really enjoyed your post!

    Reply
  6. Whole Foods Living says

    April 9, 2013 at 5:46 pm

    Fun blog topic today! I always loved Haikus in school. Thanks for the reminders…5-7-5! I may have to try to write one when I have time later! Happy A-to-Z 2013! ~Angela, Whole Foods Living, http://www.wholefoodsliving.blogspot.com/

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  7. Jo says

    April 9, 2013 at 11:44 am

    Wish I could write Haiku – I have always enjoyed it.

    JO ON FOOD, MY TRAVELS AND A SCENT OF CHOCOLATE

    Reply

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